If I Forgot
Má rinne mé dearmad
A rá leat
Go bhfuil grá agam duit
Inniú, bhuel. . .
If I forgot
To tell you
That I love you
Today, well . . .
BC / December 31, 2021
Some suggestions from Kathleen for different ways this poem could end:
I just forgot.
Get over it.
You forgot to tell me, also.
That’s an omen of impending doom.
I’m a schmuck.
My love for you is beyond words.
Your beauty silences me.
My head was elsewhere.
It’s because I don’t.
I’m tired of saying it with no response from you.
I don’t want to be repetitive.
I hate public signs of affection.
I really don’t like you at all.
When I wrote this little poem, I knew it didn't have an ending (or had an ambiguous ending), but I thought it still might work. The person you showed it to would probably fill in the appropriate ending, I thought. Anyway, I don think this exactly worked based on some feedback I got. When I showed it to my friend Kathleen, who knows "cúpla focal" (a couple of words or more) of Irish, she supplied me with a list of funny ways to end this poem, which I have posted above.
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